I read this and thought of redemption. A person sinning then finding their way to God. Good work with the form and a very good job with the message you wanted to communicate.

This is another winner. Your words are like the daily truth, a recall of inspiration. really well worded with a nice flow,Good job Olwin as always
Jimmy

Lento seems to be this weeks fad and this is the best of the ones I have read to date an excellent effort which was simple direct and painted vivid stark images of hopelessness then perhaps something better. An excellent Lento worth a 5/5 Ray S

As I read it I felt like a soul is lost & is been
called towards a light of hope..a touching
read..take care.

This was a great write with a great message, the way I see it is this person sins then confesses and realize they have done the wrong thing. By letting the world pass them by and making the bad decision. Anyways .. you did great with this, it holds meaning and a message for all to read. Well done.

Redemption, what a wonderful way for it to be described. You never let us down. 5/5, Em