This puts the reader into such a peaceful place . Where nature rules and things are beautiful. Nice nice haiku chain

A beautiful poem describing nature. It is a lovely picture you have painted Sylvia... delightful to read :) I love it!

Really nice, Silvia,

I could see it all in front of me!

Indeed all life is reborn, an endless circle and I hope it will continue to do so!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Beautiful work, I loved how you said the flowers brightened up the landscape, that was my favorite line :) Well done yet again!

^Spring rains renewing,
washing away winter's grime,
rebirthing all things.^

What beautiful picture painting imagery to start off the piece.

^Flowers are blooming,
presenting colors,
brightening landscape.^

The second line has only 5 syllables and should have 7.

^Birds, bees, butterfiles,
scurrying about their work,
giving us beauty.^

Nature sure is beautiful. Soul cleansing, refreshing and relaxing and that is the feelI get from this piece. Nice job!

Its like the begining of life..starting all over
again..nicely written with vivid images...good
write!

Very evocative of spring - and summer. I'm sorry to see it go - Seems like it only just got here!

A charming set of haiku's. Just what we need after such a severe winter.