My type of poem simple easy to read with all the good qualities I like of my poetry. flow. meter with sufficient contents to stir the emotions as I am sure as you get older you will some day in your life do as you said in your poem:

So, I close my eyes, and remember,
when I used to take pictures of you.

Thank God time is a great healer.
Excellent 5/5 Ray S

Aw... A sweet write, with a touch of sadness in it. These lines touched my heart...

"I wish you were still here with me.
Here with me for real, and forever"

A very heartfelt write... that is just beautifully written. I loved it. Well done.