by Lady Nik Aug 14, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
I look in the mirror... |
This one. :] |
by Ken
I cant really express in words how I feel about this poem it is very deep and emotional. the last three lines "I look at the mirror and watch no one |
A very sad poem of immense volume yet it carried your message excellently. Being of an older generation I don't or can't understand the idea of disfigurement or cutting ones self, yet I after reading a lot of poems that call it to my attention am getting the drift of sadness, disillusionment and despair which brings it about not to mention abuse and disappointment, Your poem seems a bit more terminal to all I have read yet never apologise for such a great verse its length though long was necessary to get all your thoughts together. |
Too much flesh. |
by mandy
Very beautiful and so, so sad. Amazing emotions, relatable to many. |