A very tragic and sorrowful feeling poem. writing depressing poetry always makes me feel better. i hope that this, at least, made you feel better than before you wrote it.

also... i just wanted to comment on this part of the poem:
"I love you,
And you had so may clues.
The damage I would cause,
The things I would do.
I hope you're not mad,
But I don't want you to be sad,
At least I was glad.
That I had someone like you."

^ all threw-out the poem you had a nice rhym scheme with each 2 lines rhyme. but with these lines you dropped your rhyming scheme but then continued it after. you might have did it unintentiionally, i'm not saying it wasn't good... but it was a bid odd.

keep up the good work
~Ben

Wow so deep and emotional. 5/5, Em x

I loved it.
I agree with Ben.
Though might I add that
When you wrote
"you had so many clues
The damage I would cause
The things I would do"

Was a great line to me(: