Im really suprised as to how well it sounded. the rhyming was really nice and it made the poem flow nice and smoothly. and its always nice to have a family that supports you.

well done
~Ben

Thx.....thats was nice.

Thx.....thats was nice.

I love it, such a sweet dedication to your family. Very inspirational. 5/5, Em x

This is a really moving powerful poem really capturing the close bond between family theres so much emotion in this the rythem is smooth and flowing and the stucture is well built in the poem

well done 5/5

Ben and black fox pretty much wrapped it up alright.

its an outstanding piece dedicated to loved ones. very refreshing and nice to see such heartfelt appreciation. the genuineness touched me indeed.