by Loveless Dreamer Aug 15, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
There are many things I want to be, |
I really enjoy your writing! Keep up the good work! |
Great poem, really well written, full of love and desire. One comment to make, if you spaced it out it a bit more, made it into verses it would have more impact, at the moment it feels very rushed and jumbled together. |
Awww thx. :) |
by Kuro
You have a really good way with words. for a 14 yr old you certainly do surprise me. ^_^ |