by Courageous Dreamer Aug 15, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
-,- Written for a challenge by Italian Stallion [Joe] using one of the senses, & I chose hear - - |
by mandy
Wow; that was beautiful. So descriptive! I could picture everything. A very sweet write, 5/5! |
"A khaki trail inscribed |
by Sourav
I love the depiction. It's so free flowing. Liked the intensity in simplicity! Well done! |
by Sylvia
Your words bring forth nice pleasant images of walking on the shore, palm trees, shells. The last two verses leave me wondering if it is a person or a shell that you have found. Could be either, gives the reader something to think about. Well done. |
by Ingrid
Beautiful wording in this poem, Temps:) |