This gave me chills, I didnt know her like you did Joe, but you have such a big heart to write something like this. It's full of sadness, but well written. *hugs*

This is a beautiful poem. Very touching too... Lol. I don't know who it is about... but it reminded me of the time I lost my mother, Lol. A very heartfelt write, that you have so well expressed.

All the best...
Olwin.

Aww this was sad JOE JOE. But I liked it. I think you told your story well :) You amaze me you talented guy you. Keep em coming. Nik

And at the closing of today
a peaceful rest we will lay,
lifting all our pain away
with each and every prayer we say.

^^this was my favorite line. the ryme was right on and you didn't just come up with random words that rymed this made sense. good job! :)

A truly sad poem, but i still loved it...it was beautiful..keep it up ;)