Force of Nature

by Sylvia   Aug 16, 2009


Act One, Scene One (Mount St. Helens)

The mountain rumbles and roars to life, earth's crust trembles.
A demonstration of power and strength,
she erupts, belches clouds of ash and gases into the air,
chokes life from all things, cloaks them in shades of dismal gray.
Imparts scenes that resemble a nuclear winter wonderland.
Mesmerizing, palpable silence,
exquisite beauty until the realization of havoc
wreaked upon the land, with vengeance, becomes apparent.
With excruciating patience and persistence,
nature begins to transform desolate landscape
into one capable of supporting flora and fauna.
Still a very barren landscape, not the moonscape of 1981,
more like, "the Mojave desert in August, without the shrubs."

Act One, Scene Two (Kilauea)

Kilauea, home to the Hawaiian goddess of volcanoes, Pele.
Legend says when the goddess is angry,
she roars to life, eruptions occur,
and Pele has been angry for many decades.
She spews red hot, molten rock, lava
from deep within the belly of the beast.
Pahoehoe crawls down the mountain side,
scorches, sears everything in its path.
Magma inches along toward the ocean,
a glowing mass, that heaves, struggles for breath,
leaves behind complete and utter destruction.
Exploding with fury when lava crawls into the ocean,
small droplets, cool in the air, form teardrop shapes, Pele's Tears;
Pele's Hair formed by thin brittle strands of volcanic glass,
cooled by the ocean waters.

Copyright © 2009 Sylvia All Rights Reserved

NOTES:
(Mount St. Helens is an active stratovolcano located in Skamania County, Washington, last eruption, May 18, 1980.)

(Kilauea in Hawaii is currently the most active volcano on the Earth spewing lava continuously since January 1983. In local belief the volcano is the home of the Hawaiian goddess of volcanoes, Pele.)

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  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    This sounds kind of like a narrative over a documentary than a poem to a certain degree:
    Lines like this

    'Still a very barren landscape, not the moonscape of 1981,'

    Support that.

    I think the idea of two contrasting volcanos is a great idea, and you do your job in creating the images of destruction of what volcanos leave in their aftermath.

    I don't know really what to suggest, other than I don't feel it's 'poetic', more prose kind of a feel to it. It's consistent for what it is. It delivers what you intended but if it was a poem, then you might want to consider using more poetic techinques.

    It is well writte, Sylvia. Original, too. I have no suggestions on the sentence structures. But maybe you could consider it to being two small contrasting pieces of prose, instead of poetry.

  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This is an amazing write... Very descriptive of a volcano and it's power... with vivid images. Loved it! Wonderfully written... :)

    Olwin.

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This was a magnificently penned. Like watching it all happen. The imagery was so realistic. Very Impressive

  • 15 years ago

    by Corinne

    Very strong writing - Both sections make me feel like I'm near the edge of a crater, watching them erupt! It must be something to see - from the safety of a helicopter, that is!
    ;-)

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I love this story poem of nature. It draws
    ancient images for the reader to see & feel.
    An excellent write *claps*