One perfect song

by mckenzie   Aug 16, 2009


She is the melody
A gentle note sweet in sound
Dancing gracefully through the airwaves
With delicate steps, poise and balance

She plays beautifully, precise and flawless
Melting the heart with each citation
A master of her art
A genuine wonder to behold

She never fails to move me

Such joy I cannot withhold
So I lift my voice to accompany hers
And I sing for all it's worth

Maybe for just an audition, but nevertheless
To join in, even for a moment in her endless song
Her masterpiece that is all she is
And all that she would become

By Matthew McKenzie

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  • 13 years ago

    by Joseph Boadi

    Wow this is flawless.

  • 13 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Overall a wonderful write; however, there are a few minor things that you can do to improve upon it. For one, use punctuation. Two, don't use a lot of filler words. Here I'll give you an example of the first stanza:

    "She is the melody
    A gentle note sweet in sound
    Moving gracefully through the airwaves
    With delicate steps, poise and balance"

    This could easily be better read with some punctuation and some minor changes in the wording...

    'She is the melody,
    gentle; sweet in sound.
    Gracefully moving airwaves
    delicately, balanced and poised.'

    Other than the above stated and my example, this was a well thought out piece, keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 13 years ago

    by ang3lbbii

    Wow! i liked it...!!! (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Niveus Nox

    If you're interested, send me a pm.

  • 14 years ago

    by Niveus Nox

    Grace and peace to you from God.

    Personally, I greatly enjoy reading love poems that incorporate the arts in its story. Those first two stanzas are very elegant and graceful. Absolutely gorgeous!

    Would you be interested in co-writing a poem with me sometime?

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