Rain.

Great poem...i gave it a 5. shows that a person can be strong through the hardrest things in life. great job.

*Val

This seems familiar >_>

thought you'd like more comments on it so here i go!

okay, like i mentioned for the contest, i love every idea about rain. its just so soothing, calm and cleansing. it was a bit different feeling you get, which is fine. i gave you a 4... (some jerk gave you a 1 -_-)

anyway, i couldn't give you a 5 because... i hate doing this but i also want to be constructive. it had a 3 stanza throughout most of it, which was different. but you didn't stay with it 0_o. you switched to a 4 stanza in the 4th paragraph.

what i did like about this was the ending. one single line. it wraps the feeling of hope and seeing through a storm pretty well. quirky, but still good. keep it up ^_^

Love that line 'Embrace the coldness in the air
Become stiff && still without a care' its definitely awesome xx