Comments : Carving away the pain...

  • This was really good. I loved it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Odessa

    I know exactly how that is. That is how I lived for bout a year. It's very good. I love it

  • 15 years ago

    by Grunge Angel

    Focus more on the content of you poem then how you are writing it. Poetry isn't all about rhyme. good work,..keep writing and you're sure to get better.

  • 15 years ago

    by Felicia Tursi

    I Love It.
    Defiantly Can Relate.

  • 15 years ago

    by Felicia Tursi

    I Love It.
    Defiantly Can Relate.