Wow this really hits home I know i put my
family through hell but they never gave up on me and they really should have . I must have tried to stop using a million times but
finally I just had enough. thats the only way
i could really quit when i was stopping for me. all the other times was for everyone else
and it just don't work like that you have to
want to stop for yourself but anyway i clean and enjoying my life sober and my family still
with me and have always been. I hope no I
PRAY the same thing happens for your family
too. I like your writting style the way you called your dad a baby without saying it
that was cool your rhying was awesome
all together a excellent poem you make me
as the reader feel your anger and pain
I look forward to reading all your poems

Very nice write. I would've liked to see some punctuation, but other than that, it was a nice write.