This made me smile, lol.
and i bet every girl who has read twilight has fallen in love with Edward. i, on the other hand, prefer Jake. haha
on a serious note, this was a very creative write. sometimes you're so into the characters you wish they were real . .
hope to read more of your work :]

- Liz

I absolutely adored this from start to finish. You have done a marvelous job of conveying to the reader the love of books. BTW Like the above comment by Liz, I am team Jacob too lol.
Great Job!
Take Care,
Kay

AMAZING! It was like you were describing everything that i was/am feeling when the book is in my hands.
Keep writing! =)

Thanks everyone. However, sorry to disappoint - but Edward is not a vampire. He is Edward Rochester. I have been in love with him since I was 14, when I first read Charlotte Bronte's novel, Jane Eyre.

Love this poem!! for you to put twilight into poetry is A-mazing.. keep up the great work.. 5/5

Woww..Sounds verry familiar :)
Love it.

It's not Twilight, people. I've never read those books. It's Edward Rochester from JANE EYRE.

Thanks for the positive feedback, though :)

HaHa... a very good write, that brought a smile to my face. I loved it ! Very original and unique piece of work :)

Excellent!

All the best,
Olwin.

Oh My Gosh! this was so good. i was smiling a lot! that makes me happy :P
I think thats really cool, (the poem) because its what some one who really loves reading feels when they get into the book.
Like they wish the person was real or someone they know was more like that. I loove to read its an escape from my life and u just put into words the way it makes me feel
Good job! 5/5

It's twilight right?

This is absolutely beautiful. It kept me wanting more, 5/5. Em