Winter (String Haiku)

by Dreamofolwin   Aug 19, 2009


Winter beckons now
Her icy hand numbing me
Stealing all my warmth

Ice covers the ground
Glazing everywhere it sees
Sparkling so brightly

Trees stand bare and cold
Shivering from winter winds
Lonely and bereft.

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*Haiku is an unryhming form of Japanese poetry with a syllable count of 5,7,5. Generally about nature.

with the string Haiku just do 3 of them. stay with the same subject.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I dislike the cold, dark nights of the winter but this poem makes it seem so beautiful even if it is cold lol. 5/5, Em

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Another great write, loved how you kind of gave winter the personification touch in the first stanza. good descriptions! nice work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    That is winter all right. nice work all around.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Lovely... i could feel the chills :P
    well penned :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Ohhh yes the touch of winter can be seen and
    felt..enjoyed this read :D

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