Beatifully written, Nate and with so much emotion..

she will never kiss my lips
i will never feel her soft touch

^^
This is the most special part of loving, the need to touch and the kiss...I think the first kiss when you are in love gives the most incredible feeling of happiness a person is able to feel.

You wrote it well, I hope in time you will find someone who you can share your sweet personality with again:)

Take care:)

5/5 Ingrid

To have loved and lost is a very hard experience for the heart... this I know. You have given us a most touching write... yes, your pain and anguish can be felt, Lol. But I too hope and pray that in time you will meet someone who your will fill your heart again, with love and warmth :) Yes... it can happen... and I hope for you it will.

Best wishes... An Excellent write,
Olwin.

Hey i never commented on this...

alas, this poem about the longing for love is indeed quite mournful. its like knowing that i would never eat a oatmeal rasin cookie ever again. that might seem like a stupid comparisson... unless you knew how much i LOVE oatmeal rasin cookies.

nice jorb
~ben

Love, creates such beautiful words.Makes life seem endless. Ah, yes...Beautifully written Nate(:

This poem is veryy sad but at the same time
its very beautiful:)
i loved the way you expressed your feelings because it helped me feel the wayy u felt...
its such a great poem:)
loved it!
5/5

What repels, is not meant to be. Where pleasure is vast, doom is known. He who brings you pain, helps you learn. The right answer, solves a problem.