This was a beautiful poem written for someone whom you are close with. Very sweet--such a great sister you are to write something like this. This was really sweet and came straight from the heart. Loved the stanza how you were afraid of the dark but he was the like the nightlight that captured stars in his palm. That was so unique and well done! (: Keep it up!

This is such a lovely dedication... reminds me of my brother... this bond is so special and you have described it so beautifully...

//You once told me
you were afraid to fly
So I whispered
spread your wings
-You vanished
within flight.//

^^ you have to let them fly else how will they survive... beautifully penned... just loved it...

Love it Mel :)
especially the flying and the dark parts. well done :)