Autumn (String Haiku)

by Dreamofolwin   Aug 20, 2009


Leaves come tumbling down
As the wind blows in full force
Slowly settling down

Trees sway discontent
There's a whistling through the trees
Mesmerising me

Darkness starts to creep
Desiring more of the day
Stealing summers joys

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Beautiful, 5/5. Em

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Another very well written Haiku Chain.. this one describing Autumn. I thought it was great, the ending sad about how the days get shorter, stealing summer's joys. but thats how it goes! (: well done!

  • 15 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Could use a couple of those days right now. Good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Yo're going backwards , first winter now autumn lol
    Kidding this was really a cool Haiku chain.
    Very descriptive and picturesque

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Yo're going backwards , first winter now autumn lol
    Kidding this was really a cool Haiku chain.
    Very descriptive and picturesque

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