Comments : Autumn (String Haiku)

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Autumn is a nice time of the year but a sad one as we know then that Summer is gone for another year. Autumn gives us the beautiful leaves of color as they change. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Lovely imagery...

    //Darkness starts to creep
    Desiring more of the day
    Stealing summers joys //
    ^^beautifully penned... i just loved the last line... it gives a feeling of cheerfulness...

    beautifully penned...

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Yo're going backwards , first winter now autumn lol
    Kidding this was really a cool Haiku chain.
    Very descriptive and picturesque

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Yo're going backwards , first winter now autumn lol
    Kidding this was really a cool Haiku chain.
    Very descriptive and picturesque

  • 15 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Could use a couple of those days right now. Good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Another very well written Haiku Chain.. this one describing Autumn. I thought it was great, the ending sad about how the days get shorter, stealing summer's joys. but thats how it goes! (: well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Beautiful, 5/5. Em