Http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1129182

i added on.

Fly between today and tomorrow,
smiling from the corners of the earth.
spend some time playing in puddles,
am i the dollar determining your worth?

^^ capturing stanzas... the last line very powerful and though provoking... beautifully penned...

shot like a sparrow out of a widows tree,

^^ loved the imagery here

where angels piss on my own parade.

^^ the ending somewhat didnt match with the overall feeling of the poem... it sounded a little too harsh... well thats what I felt...

overall a wonderful collab... kudos to both the writers...

I forgot about this ????