I love it im picking up the piceces of my sould such a strong being it was great your a really good writer keep up the good work:)
5/5 once again

"and all of these tears in my eyes
i promise myself some day they will dry
so I'm picking up the pieces of my soul
yes one day i will shine like gold
no one has ever asked me about my dreams
i want to be the happiest person you ever seen"

^thats my fav part of the poem :) excelent work on the whole thing. Its truly inspirational.