by Courageous Dreamer Aug 21, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
I'm stumbling over stones of doubt wondering if you'll return--yet an important treasure sparkling in gold reassures me you will. That treasure is time. |
by Sourav
This is a nice write. It has passion, emotion and a very well written lines. Loved the way you've constructed the whole poem. Though I feel structure can be better but the poetic expression is fantastic! Well done! |
by The Prince
'I long to hear your voice yet I won't forget to smile...you always tell me I look beautiful when I do.' |
by Sylvia
Well done. Time doesn't always heal things for us and friends and lovers, don't always return with the passage of time. Sad but true and it is a shame when we cannot let go and move on. I like the way you used free verse to write this and are willing to experiment and continue the growth process. |
by Ingrid
Temps, |