Time is a Treasure.

by Courageous Dreamer   Aug 21, 2009


I'm stumbling over stones of doubt wondering if you'll return--yet an important treasure sparkling in gold reassures me you will. That treasure is time.

Lately, time has became transparent--blossoming without interference.

In a blink of an eye; two weeks have dissolved along with the sweetness of your voice.

Yet I still hold on strong to that faith; time will only bring us closer if we allow it to be free.

Every new day scarlet thoughts of you kiss not only my mind; but my heart. Trails of emotion let me know you're still there despite how thick loneliness may be.

You'll never disappear--for you're the greatest; you opened my eyes to so much. You laid down the stepping stones as I followed your advice. You're my best friend; I've told you too many times to count. That will never be a lie, it will always be the absolute truth.

I miss you terribly--but will continue to wrap myself around this faith and not let go of any last strand of hope. Time tells me...you will return. In the meantime, I won't let this weigh heavily on me;

I long to hear your voice yet I won't forget to smile...you always tell me I look beautiful when I do.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is a nice write. It has passion, emotion and a very well written lines. Loved the way you've constructed the whole poem. Though I feel structure can be better but the poetic expression is fantastic! Well done!

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    'I long to hear your voice yet I won't forget to smile...you always tell me I look beautiful when I do.'

    Brilliant.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Well done. Time doesn't always heal things for us and friends and lovers, don't always return with the passage of time. Sad but true and it is a shame when we cannot let go and move on. I like the way you used free verse to write this and are willing to experiment and continue the growth process.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Temps,

    You wrote this down beautifully.
    I think you can write in any given format, also this free verse stuff.
    I am not going to leave any more words in this box, because it's read by so many.
    You know how I feel, I hope life will give you all you deserve, sweet pea:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

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