Temps,

You wrote this down beautifully.
I think you can write in any given format, also this free verse stuff.
I am not going to leave any more words in this box, because it's read by so many.
You know how I feel, I hope life will give you all you deserve, sweet pea:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Well done. Time doesn't always heal things for us and friends and lovers, don't always return with the passage of time. Sad but true and it is a shame when we cannot let go and move on. I like the way you used free verse to write this and are willing to experiment and continue the growth process.

'I long to hear your voice yet I won't forget to smile...you always tell me I look beautiful when I do.'

Brilliant.

This is a nice write. It has passion, emotion and a very well written lines. Loved the way you've constructed the whole poem. Though I feel structure can be better but the poetic expression is fantastic! Well done!