Oh my goodness...I love this Raj... It's brilliant! Very well done... it's a real work of art! Extremely well crafted and put together...

Fantastic :)
Olwin.

Very creative . I thought you did an excellent job

You did do a good job. It is too bad that we cannot do the shape poetry without all the dots and dashes to hold the shape. Independence Day regardless of where you live, is a day to be celebrated and thanks given for being free. Well done.

Well, I took a good look at this and I was thinking, that if you were to make a straight line from top to finish using capital x's and then put the story in the flag, so to say, that then it would look even better, just a thought:)
I think Independance is the greates good on earth and indeed should be celebrated. So many lost their lives for our freedom, they should be honored for all eternity:)

A real fun poem, daring too:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Oh yes! Great job in doing this. I can never
do shape poetry & admire those who do it
soooo perfectly! Excellent work!

I totally got it was a flag! Well done, A wonderful salute to your country