What do you mean by "Fiends for me" and "LOVE IS OBSOLETE, WHAT I WANT IS MORE"?

i just don't think that fiends for me is not the line you want to put on the poem. and the poem has two emotions (1. excitement for love and 2. sadness for leaving), i suggest you separate the emotions so you can have two poems.

it was nice reading the happy lines but since you stated everything that happened, my emotion changed to sadness.

Well if you have ever had experience with a crack head - fiens for me makes alot of sense but when i submitted it the website just corrected it that way. and i still think out of all of my poems this is the best one. their all about her.

I feel like you gave too much info... u didnt leave anything to the imagination. it sounded more like lust then love to me.