by Mr Rhee Aug 22, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I taste blood... |
Wow i really liked it the pain in your words was so vivid i mean you expressed what you wanted to say so easily great job! i loved it 5/5 |
I know the taste of the blood..but using blood to your piece. i pictured out alot of things... ofcourse the STRONG powerful emotion of every stanza is strike me, stunning me and feel your piece. |
Wow I love the ending! Good! |
The last verse is missing a statement I think it should be bloody minded yet leaves me flat. |