I have read this three times and it leaves me hanging. I like all that I have read in this poem and was going to ignore it but I thought it only fair that I comment so although it has the content of a good poem it leaves me hanging and bemused as I could not get the gist of what your message is or what the bite is, it left me flat and confused not usual for your poems which are usually simple and easy to follow it for me lacks a hook or something to get my teeth in. 4/5 Ray S

I really enjoyed your take on how life can leave us. It was written well, the flow and style are unique and intriguing. Well done, 5/5. Em