by The Flame Within Aug 22, 2009
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
It is imprisoned in the depths of my mind. |
I really like this write, you could work the flow a bit and remove some filler words and separate some lines, but overall it was a really nice read. |
I have never read a poem that rung more true. This is an excellent interpertation of real life struggle. Brilliant choice of words, I love the flow of the poem. |