I have never read a poem that rung more true. This is an excellent interpertation of real life struggle. Brilliant choice of words, I love the flow of the poem.
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Grace

I really like this write, you could work the flow a bit and remove some filler words and separate some lines, but overall it was a really nice read.

I feed it more and more whenever I think of my solitude.
Or of my past.
I have locked it in the abyss of my mind.
Its roar echoes in the halls of my thoughts.
It whispers to me, asking for freedom.
I can not let it free,

^This was my favorite part, I enjoyed the struggle throughout, good work.