by Ingrid Aug 22, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
love is
As the waves came rolling in with the tide |
by Ben Pickard
This is a brilliant piece Ingrid - very moving and powerfully written. I love the fifth stanza about Neptune. |
by anand singh
You both did an awesome job on this beautiful piece my friend. |
by mandy
Great write, very moving! 5/5 |
by Dreamofolwin
Well done. A brilliant write that gives a vivid picture in the readers mind, that of a sailor leaving the woman he loves to go out to sea. I thought it was beautifully worded and expressed... and an exdellent job from you both! Well done :) |
by kelleyana
Very, very well done both of you. What a beautiful imagery you creates. It is so vivid that i could actually see the image like i'm watching a sad love story. It also reminds me of the sailors who'd left their love ones behind and knowing there might not be a tomorrow, but such is life. Again Very well done. This poem merits a win, i will surely vote for it. 5/5, kel. |