by Sourav
I wonder how this poem didn't get more comments. But I'm not surprised! As I know the trait of this site. |
by Lonely Rider
This one is so brilliantly penned... |
by Rachel RTVW
I liked some of the word choice. I didn't care for the overuse of filler words, the repetition or how the lines are fragmented. There is a natural pause at the end of each line so to have the poem structured like this is very distracting. |
by Seth Rowley
That was a great poem even though I really don't understand what you are trying to tell me |