by Courageous Dreamer Aug 22, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I'm wide awake--restless as desires tease this forlorn mind; perhaps if these walls weren't bubblegum pink but rather a dull white, romance wouldn't be of annoyance. Minutes mold into hours; it's impossible to sleep without being able to cuddle close with you; battling cerulean drops from escaping--twice the challenge. Sheets become tousled with uncomfortable toss and turns; It feels as though I'm laying on top of stone--every muscle aches; my heart like a bullseye pierced with arrows of pain. It's just another long night of restlessness. |
by Lonely Rider
Intense emotions ... I could feel the restlessness in each line... the way you have narrated and described the scene is wonderful... very well penned... |
by Elapsed
This was a great read, though sad, it was full of emotion. |
Whats up with the down-voting crap? Someone has nothing else to do. |
by Ingrid
Great title, Temps, it drew my attention right away. |
by Sylvia
I would consider this prose and you have captured restlessness to a tee. Tossing and turning, sheets wadded up, I know this all to well. |