Very nice style and the poem expresses a great deal of passsion

Breathing is lost
Lost to whatever you took from me
I'm lost in the warmth
The warmth of the monotony

*Okay so I loved your last poem and I just needed to read more :) I loved the stanza above. "Monotomy" what a great word!! I love this poem and the whole feel of things. I felt you didn't hold anything back and you wrote straight from the heart. I have no idea why more people aren't reading your stuff, because this piece was brillant. All I can say is you blew me away with this one. Keep it up hun :) Nik*