It seems as though this poem is not for the reverent, but I am rating it five because though it was very shocking I believe it was your intent as the author to share your most shocking feelings

ps the reflection on your feelings on death seemed to oppose the dirty pretty poem I wrote for my dog which I found the remains of in the house. The only thing that made it easier for me is to think of his soul at rest seperate from the decomposition of his shell

anyway I did enjoy reading your honest feelings