This poem held my attention and reads like a ballad ...very interesting

Somewhere among this poem were the words Long john, it was certainly long and you will probably find not many will read this because of it. Yet I got sucked in again as at first I thought drivel yet I kept at it and it enraptured me because it seemed to go on and on its thread I lost after 0200 or something like that yet determined I carried on and found its end I was baffled as I had enjoyed it and it was like a breathe of fresh air full on the new yet not to taxing. I red it again and sailed through it like an old friend pulling me along I actually enjoyed it freshness and newness like life it went on and on and kept my interest truly remarkable I gave it a 5/5 there are errors with spelling
and punctuation Prostitute springs to mind somewhere but it did not take away the feeling that I had read something special two poems now of yours I have enjoyed Excellent Ray S