Comments : Question

  • 15 years ago

    by Spirit

    I really like the idea that you had for this poem. I would like to see what you can add to it. What can you do to make the reader question themselves even more?

    Don't get the wrong idea. When I say add to it I don't mean make it 30 verses long. I like the bluntness of it but try taking it up a notch.

    It's just a thought.

    Thanks for the read.
    >-Spirit-->