I kind of liked the way you started each line the same, but as it progressed you lost a lot of flow in your poem because you had to end each previous line with something that would fit in. Second stanza you used "here" when it should have been "hear". Very honest and open poem though and it well pretty well done. good job 4/5

I've had to do something like this awhile ago. I love the honesty in this piece and the way you don't hold back. I like the flow and how well your words form a picture of you for me. I feel like I know you a little more and what you're thinking about. Your ideas were clearly expressed and easy to comprehend. Not my favorite from you, but still a good read. Keep it up dear. Nik