You go girl!!! You shouldnt have to change who or what you are for anyone, they should except you for you and if they cant then oh well... and I for one, love and respect you just the way you are!!

I like this because it's not typical poetry. it speaks loud and clear how you feel about being you. The repitition creates strong feelings, and some of the words you use evoke emotions that can help readers relate to your poem. great job, and looking forward to reading more of your work.

--gRnGaNgL