11:11 i wished for you

by Second to None   Aug 24, 2009


11:11 i wished for you
11:11 Did you wish for me too?

11:11 was it a waist of time?
11:11 To wish is not a crime

11:11 All i want to do is talk
11:11 I kiss the clock

11:11 my love for you is pure
11:11 alls you want is her

11:11 i want you to love me
11:11 you wouldn't so much as hug me

11:11 my least favorite minute
11:11 my feeling push me to my limmit

11:11 i hate my life
11:12 i pick up the knife

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sarah Mirabile

    I always wish at 11:11. :)
    great poem! keep up the great work.

  • 15 years ago

    by My Name Is Mouse

    I like how it was 11-11 all the way apart from 11-12 at the end. that was cool. i like this poem. xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Katherine

    Quote "to wish is not a crime" is my favorite part and it's true. Everyone wishes for something in life breaking it down to an object to a person. Interesting ending though. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Joyous

    Superstition? Wish at 11:11? Ehh... anyone mind to explain to me why and what?

    Anyway, the "11:11" is perfect! That numbers is so attractive! Very clever of you using it as a title, meaningful to you and attractive to others. A piece of emotional work. I personally like the sentence " I kiss the clock ". Its so fresh and new its like my first time reading it haha somehow its quite funny in a cute way.

    I've read the comments and some think you should have a better ending are the continue of the story. But I think the less you know, the more you can imagine. Thats the unique part of your poem for me. It ended in a curious and pain way. Nice! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Interesting concept for a poem. I liked it.

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