I really enjoyed this poem. I love how you reverted back to the childlike emotions us girls tend to go through, talking to our teddy bears. I adored the theme of this poem. Though in my opinion I think that perhaps you should have used the correct punctuation in your contractions. But, that did not take away from the poem it's just technicalities. We are all poetically inclined to write as we wish. This was a very lighthearted read and I enjoyed it alot. 5/5 |
by Sylvia
Lighthearted and fun to read. Teddy is the one friend as you said that will never betray our secrets and will always listen to us and be there. Well done. |
by Rachel RTVW
Very simply written, a cute children's poem! |
Very cute. I think many girls can relate to this poem |
by Natalie84
Can i borrow your fuzzy blue teddy??? |
by Baby Rainbow
ARRRRGHGHHHHH, I am so glad I found this!! - you know how much I will relate to this poem, and you will know exactly why! |