Walking the shoreline barefoot with the sand squishing between your toes, listening to the water gives me a sense of peace and solitude. This poem brought those memories back for me. Well done.

Corinne,
You have been turning out some amazing stuff as of late. All of which I enjoy listening to when in song form. You have a beautiful voice and bring to life nature. Though I think you intended this to be more about creation and it's existence, you have penned within it a very lovely nature poem. Great job as always.