Comments : Rose Petals (Lanturne)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A very soft and tranquil verse, Silvia.
    It had an eastern touch to it, very lovely:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This is beautiful Sylvia. There's a lovely softness about this poem, I loved it :) I can almost smell/touch this beautiful flower... a brilliant form to that so suits your poem! Lovely!

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I agree, a soft sweet poem. Simple yet dynamic. Beautifully done

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Loved it. Short but sweet. Nice job with the simplicity when choosing your words. Silky was a interesting way of describing the texture. Well done :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Lovely... beautiful imagery :)
    I think you are in love with roses :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I can feel the rose petals silky touch. Liked
    the form as well as the poem..good write :)