by Yazdan Aug 26, 2009
category :
Life, society /
about society
Take my hand |
Hey Yazdan, |
I came back to re-read this poem again, because I enjoyed it so much. Just in my opinion, I would have liked to seen a little seperation in the poem itself from some in some of the lines, perhaps dividing your thoughts. Overall though it is quite a fresh breath of air from a poet whom I have never read before. I will be looking for more of your work as I really enjoyed this. Great Job! |
Very inspirational poem. You have done a marvelous job with this. We can always use the help of another to lift our spirits up. |