Very inspirational poem. You have done a marvelous job with this. We can always use the help of another to lift our spirits up.

I came back to re-read this poem again, because I enjoyed it so much. Just in my opinion, I would have liked to seen a little seperation in the poem itself from some in some of the lines, perhaps dividing your thoughts. Overall though it is quite a fresh breath of air from a poet whom I have never read before. I will be looking for more of your work as I really enjoyed this. Great Job!

Hey Yazdan,

Great job. I liked it alot. I've always thought you had wings at one point or like the angel on twice in a lifetime you just needed to be here to find what you could not seem to find in your first life. Great poem.

Rebbeca