The Crush

by KomBAT Kitten   Aug 26, 2009


You came out of no where
When my life was a mess
When you forced out a smile
My life was the best

We'd write out our vows
Then make future plans
Be together forever
In life as it stands

You hand over Willy
And made my heart melt
Can hardly explain
The way that i felt

One day I'll fall for you
And sew up that patch
On my heart that was missing
You promised you'd catch

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  • 15 years ago

    by Love Panda

    WOW - absolutly amazing, i loved reading this from start to finish. a very very insightful piece of work. everything flowed evenly, the structure was great, even the stanza line count. wording fit in quite nicely. love love love this one the most.

    excellent work!

    ibe
    x

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    The whole thing with a crush, it does not have enough love at first to keep going strong. it is like an energy boost of sugar, but that sugar tends to fade away, and then u have to move on to other mean. but if u dont have those means, it is bound to fail. Well I have to say that this was an awsome poem, and it deserves a 5/5, ttyl Kitten

  • 15 years ago

    by Natures Calling

    I loved how you talk about them forcing you to smile. great poem

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