by Ingrid
Silvia, |
by Dreamofolwin
Sylvia, I love how you write about the clouds playing hide and seek with the moon. I love night time... and the feeling it gives. I enjoyed reading this... though it ended with a feeling of sadness. |
Casting shadows on the ground, |
Ooo this was really pretty. I must agree with everyone else very great imagery. Loved the description of the naked tree limbs as well as how great you described the clouds, the main focus of the poem. The moon sleeping.. too many good lines in this poem, can't pick my favorite, cause they were all equally amazing! Great imagery, great poem, well done! |
by Corinne
Wonderful Sylvia. Your personification of clouds is so well done! |
by The Queen
At first i thought this was a spooky poem not until i read about the clouds being bored from the sun. I would prefer the sun to play hide and seek with the clouds rather than the moon..Scary!..Great reciation about the clouds though.. |
by katie
Very well written. I love the whole thing. Keeo on writing hun. |
by mandy
Beautifuly put. I love the wording, 5/5 |