Through the grey

Oh thanks so much!! i apreciate the feedback! its very constructive and i apreciate it whole heartedly :)

Through all the greys and monotone
Through the secrets unbeknown
Through all the mist and fears
Through all the prayers whispered through the years

*For the last line I would change the second "through" to "over" that way you don't have to say "through" twice in one line.*

There's always light among the grey
There's always truth to find
and as you walk forward you leave the mist behind.

*I like that you said "grey" and not black or darkness or something like that. People hardly refer to grey when it comes to lack of light. I'm glad you did. Very clever :) *

There's always a song to hum
There's always a hand to hold
For every quiet being,
there is another who is bold.

*Yay you did it here again when you related "quiet" and "bold". That's so creative to me*

So continue on my friend.
I will be on your left and we will make a pair
and with you I will always share.
And to make that three,
on your right god will always be.

*Aww what a sweet ending. You're friend is lucky to have you. Very nice poem. Simple and to the point. Keep it up hun. Nik*