I thought this was a very beautiful heart felt poem, resally well written from first line to the last

It's interesting how your chain of thoughts flow, from mild randomness to intense emotions. I like that you've cherished the sweet yet simple aspects of love.

Excellent poem Nonna, i liked a lot the flow of your thoughts and the melody that go through ur poem, keep up the good work

Great Poem Nonna :]]
Wondering sometimes leads u into places you never wanna go :/ it gets you thinking bad things and stuff like that.
Great job :]

5/5
Tammi Toxic