by Italian Stallion Aug 26, 2009
category :
Friendship, family /
other
Illusive beauty: a vividly portrayed dream, surrounded by an lovely image (Ink drawn - angelic silhouette, scripted with love: Sara, my friend.) and thoughts of crisp pale blossomed flowerings accompanied by an mosaic sunset. |
by XxLastHopexX
The formatting was different...but the content was really good...the flow and emotion was great |
Joe you have painted with a flourish the importance of friendship your brush highlighting its needs and the love good friendship generates very flowery and with feeling I love it as any one who has had that special friend(S) knows the feeling of belonging as they make you feel special and expect nothing back. |
by Cindy
Joe |
This is not the run of the mill poem. The imagery |
I like the idea of this poem alot. but i think you need to spend more time thinking about the flow of the poem. :) |